Work Done
Adrienne and I met with Dr. Johnson for our moderator meeting on Wednesday. I took minutes and put them in my staff folder. She basically said that we are going to have to move the panel quickly and not let anyone talk for very long since we only have an hour. She also said to make sure that you give everyone a chance to talk. After we get the questions nailed down, we will send them to her.
I've been working on getting all of the panelists onto the Visionary Press Release. I got the staff to give me comments. A lot of them were very helpful, and I feel like my press release writing skills have gotten a lot better! There weren't many comments other than for continuity. We handled class presentations a bit differently this year since we were behind. I got myself and four directors to email professors. I kept all of this listed and as organized as I could in Excel.
Over break, I assigned both Jack and Anthony the shot list and DOE Interview Schedule, which let me work on the bios and loglines that we were receiving from the filmmakers and scholars. Getting those ready for the program and the website was my number one this week. I didn't change many of the bios except for grammar purposes or for continuity (commas, spelling). I also had to cut some of the loglines due to the program space that we had. Hint: Cutting small helps a lot! try to get rid of the throw away words like "is, are" and rework them so that action verbs are used, usually you can get the sentence way smaller!
Research:
Here's some research for both your writing and others:
http://thewritelife.com/edit-your-copy/
Here are 43 words you can cut, cut, cut:
http://dianaurban.com/words-you-should-cut-from-your-writing-immediately
Moderating Research:
This is interesting, because it's not what I expected it to say. It talks about the intro, slides, where you should sit, when you should open to the audience, and inviting panelists to talk with each other:
https://hbr.org/2013/05/how-to-moderate-a-panel-like-a
Be careful about running a biased panel. We can't get so close with one panel member that we value him/her over the others. We chose them all, they are all equally knowledgable.
http://www.entrepreneur.com/article/239870